The story are very interesting. First of all I will give it 5 ⭐ for overall, story, plotline and characters. It was all being explained in detail and nice to read.
However there is still a thing or two that I can't help to dislike from this writing.
First, the writing style. Idk if it was being changed by the translation default but, there is something in the way that this story written just make me lost interest in between the reading. There is many part that I skip because I was just too boring in reading it.
Second is the revenge plotline. In the first earliest chapter it was mentioned and written how intense are the hate MC have towards her cousin for always ruining her life. But the moment she is reincarnated, that feeling seems like fading slowly, with follow up explanation of MC has a healthy mental state. For me, I hardly bought that, or perhaps just don't understand her state that the author want to show. Ofc it's great that this would progress on much more positive way, but it seems like there is no struggle at all of either MC overcome it or just let it go. She just being the passive character in this topic which only defense with no attack at all. For me, this is enough to reduce like 40% of my interest in this story. I just found it quite ridiculous with the MC have that Mary sue and golden finger cheating type that won't lose against anything other than ML but unable to find a certain decent way to drag down this parties. For what exactly, for the plot sake? So, they could unload some big secret in the future, perhaps in regards of her mother death too... Idk I just find the whole dragging and passive thing in this topic so damn annoying and boring.
Everything just became so bland that I always skipping the chapters. Even the romance are not really stand out.
Spoiler
I see many of this type of novels and no joke by the way of Chinese author on this genre always so radical on brainwashing the readers by seeing the westerners or other ras as the enemy or bad guy and and just a mere subject to look down to. Even more to those of the other Asians one, the racist remark are no joke. Idk if they being forced to write that way to pass the government standard or this type of mindset just has being planted on them, but tbh though that was the exact reason why the Chinese people outside of Chinese get the immense hate, while it's not them who brought out this certain of mindset but they are the one who's get the blame. Nevertheless the amount of softcore to hardcore racist mark on this novel is actually crazy. Up to this point I just want to ignore all the artistic aspects and just give it plain zero ⭐.
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I agree with some reader, that for a certain person this story could became really boring even if it's full of action and have the great plot and setting.
