Reborn in Konoha as the Anbu Torturer Chapter 285 Discussion

Among fanfictions in Naruto's world, this one is the most interesting to read as the MC does not want to participate in the storyline at all, he just wants to stay in the shadows, using passively his goldenfinger to get stronger.

The story is well written, with some funny moments and is more like a slice of life about the MC torturing thiefs, sometimes spies and eating Ramen.

But the main isuue with the plot, is that the MC, passively living in the first 150 chapters, becomes more and more active in the storyline, in contradiction with everything he stood for, to the point he triggers the third world war earlier and becomes OP really fast.

At the end, the MC creates a lot of chaos in the known storyline by instigating a lot of unnecessary events, in a much sloppy and messy way, black zetsu and danzo supposely did in the original storyline.

There was much potential from the first 150 chapters, but the author decided to forcely change the behavior and character of the MC, from someone lazy and uninterested by the events outiside the Anbu headquarters, to someone who creates a lot of unnecessary chaos to an already messy original storyline.