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This is an interesting fanfic.The prose (not the translation) its kinda odd, it doesn't capture that mystical whimsy of the og. Also, this story doesn't have any distinct characterization. Like, the main character is the main character and that is it. The same with the side characters. The plot is interesting enough, but its poorly written; it's a mystery in that there isn't enough information, not that it's possible to figure it out by yourself. In combination of poor characterization things just seem to happen? Like spontaneously. There is no flow.Tbh, I'm a bit confused by the tags, there is a system for the mc's golden finger, but its not listed. I am concerned about the world hopping tag, I never seen it done well.