The Hero Who Returned From Another World Becomes an Influencer in the Real World Where Dungeons Have Appeared and Makes Money! Chapter 15 Discussion

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I only gave it to chapter 15 linearly but went ahead and read 31 and 47 because they looked to be the ones that closed things out with the childhood friend.

The writing of the web novel isn't good in terms of story, character development, or world building. You're getting a rehashing of what appears in a lot of stories and it's not well executed. Kid is OP when dungeons appear in his world but due to a bug in the ability to see his level or job his "childhood friend" and classmates decide to ditch him and start bad mouthing him. He becomes successful as a streamer, takes revenge on the classmates that badmouthed him, and his childhood friend tries to declare she's pregnant with his child before self destructing. Some "high class" girls start fawning over him and are loyal sycophants.

The writing really doesn't invoke any emotion or feelings of attachment to any of the characters as they feel so one dimensional.
 
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