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I've read thanks to good ratings but it's a pity that since the author wanted to write about survival concept, the rest of the story is not well treated and teens to be unlogical and amateur like... I mean the main characters met each other, even with weak justification, they don't recognize each other... I mean, they always talk about three others eyes colours, but they still don't recognized each other. Maybe the MC wouldn't but the ML should. He has seen MC's pics, seen him face to face. Eyes is beholder of the soul, if he really loves MC, be should recognise him!. And for the background setting, using interstellar setting and only not even using the interstellar technology to fight in the different missions is useless.... I get why MC's doesn't do it, but the NPCs and second characters? That are very wealthy? The ML that's from the army?????I did skip third of chapters about MC's survival lessons to his audience.. it shows how it's a pity that the writing is overrated.
