City Of Witches Chapter 17 Discussion

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This is a terrible story.

The MC, a 27 year-old from modern-day South Korea, spent 5 years as a s*ave for a society run by witches, worked to death and ab*sed psychologically as well as sexually, and yet he still can't stop constantly thinking about just how hot his ab*sers are.

There is no reason or consistency to any character's behaviour, especially the MC:

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-One second he is willing to do anything to escape and go home, the next he refuses to do sh*t that might help him achieve it because of pride (and don't even get me started about the author's f*cked up version of pride being that the MC will do anything but who*e himself out, despite the witch regularly making him jerk off in front of her and her students and him constantly thinking how hot they are).

-One second he desperately wants to keep his ability to use magic hidden, the next he uses it against a witch to save some rando who scammed him of what little money he had.

-One second he hates being used as a human dildo, the next he's totally into it.

-One second he loathes the witch that is the main perpetrator of his ab*se, and the next he overzealously kisses her ass, and even gets hurt in trying to save her from some debris.

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And on top of it all, is the "revelation" that the witch that treats him worse than utter shit, an immortal woman who-knows how old, secretly likes him but just can't express herself.

Yaknow, like we all make our secret crushes jerk off in public under threat of death...

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It's completely and utterly ret*rded.
 
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