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The MC is too... how do I say it, much of a Simp? No, maybe he has too much plot armor and cries about the injustice that is set upon him.Anyway, the plot is all over the place. We have like four different threads each being cut off one after the other. As they're not developing into a proper scenario before being stopped for another random thought the author has.We have the associate professor witch who he hates/loves, his budding wizard powers, the twin witches and his whole escape plan in the works. Sadly none of these have developed to be considered as anything noteworthy. We are simply given a few info dumps about these things off screen and a summary which portrays his five years of ens*avement prior to the start of the story.The only thing fleshed out is the whole twin witches arc, but even then our MC proceeds to break character and act like a complete idiot. He is supposed to be a jaded, cautious individual, yet he rolls over and enjoys the act of being r*ped.Like what happened to him hating it? Of the whole 4 chps of virtue signaling to his friend lmao?Yet that isn't my main issue. My problem lays in how he acts the exact opposite of what we were told in the info dumps concerning his past.Where in this same arc, he is charmed into revealing his escape plan that was built over the last 3 years, the reveal of his magic poweress he was hiding and the non existent fortitude as he gives into his lust.And FYI this all occurs in two chapters because he willfully saves a con artist who was about to scam him out of his life savings....Like what the hell is this kind development? Is he some white knight wannabe? Is this a complete destruction of the narrative? Why is one of the Twin Witches showing up during the sketchy deal?There is too many questions and contradictions happening at once. It is so great that this is forced plot development.Every single thing that was supposed to be his established character has been thrown into the garbage. I wasted time reading these info dumps of his past when they hold little worth of actual substance.However, the author will still try to force these past traits onto the MC, but this so called persona simply doesn't exist and just adds to the word count. As every time the MC tries to act jaded, he turns around and does the opposite of his character, coming off as a hypocrite. Going so far to become a white knight... of korean descent.At this point, I want to smack the idiocy out of the MC. He isn't fooling me and he really isn't fooling those witches he just banged. He's acting like a massive Tsundere.Anyway, whenever he has a secret, it gets revealed. The associate professor witch he claims to adhord, he instead falls in love with. Whenever consistency is involved, it is shaken to make way for the complete opposite of events.In the end the fic just contains word fluff in order to get from point A to point B. The author forces the MC to act contrary to his true self so he can get to the R-Scenes. To sleep with as many witches as possible at the quickest speed is the true aim here. There is no need for legit character development when that one witch introduced, sole purpose is for that one R-scene that has come to mind late at night.So yeah. I can't say the story structure is good. Over 25% of this fic is simply smut... the other 75% is an attempt to reestablish the MC's jaded traits which have and will be repeatedly broken with in a chapter. Especially after he keeps on getting that pre nut clarity to explain his erratic actions LOL.In other words, the MC cant be taken seriously which makes the story suffer. Though the R-Scenes are rather nice and if you can ignore the plot for the 'Plot' you might enjoy this.Rate 3.2/5