I Was Dismissed from the Hero’s Party Because They Don’t Need My Training Skills, so I Strengthen My [Fief] Which I Got as a Replacement for My Retirement Money. Chapter 15 Discussion

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Boring beginnings. Expect a really slow start to this novel and go in only if you have the patience for a slow burn.

We're at chapter 15 and he barely started any territory development yet. It has been 15 chapters with lots of sightseeings, describing of meals and landscapes. It could be worse, like longs expositions, although there are some of those as well.

The chapters are also short and the translator started chopping them into 2 after they got a little less short. If you want something to follow chapter by chapter, you might give this one a pass.

The MC also sounds a little too boring and passive, taking offense from a merchant and still working with him later. But then again, there's barely any character interactions aside from that so... yeah.

Anyways, it's hard to judge the entire novel with only 15 short chapters that were mostly the MC sightseeing around places. I'll update the review once more chapters have been released, but it kind of hard to recommend this one right now. For now I just hope things pick up and the story actually begins.
 
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