- #1
Its very "Okay"The story was entertaining enough for me to finish it, but not enough to come back for a second read, nor enough to recommend it in good conscience. Its a junk food kind of read, where its enjoyable but its not that good.Now to list the negatives:
- For one the antagonist is too damn pathetic. It makes conflict with him really boring.
- There was a sudden R*p* part perpetrated by the MC. The FML was not unwilling, but she was not in the right state of mind during that time. She was in a state kind of like being drunk while also being extremely h*rny so her consciousness was not all there. That was really weird and ngl was kinda icky. I take solace to the fact that the FML liked the MC and was willing, but still... ewwww
- Story was rush near the end. I mean one of the heroines was left unresolved even til the end.
- The last two chapters were very how should I put it... very "patriotic" the eye rolling kind.