I was Summoned to Another World, but Also Called Useless and Kicked Out. ~This World was Easy Mode for Me~ Chapter 3 Discussion

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In just three chapters:

    • The kind class pres (hero) and the main girl which are presented as really good people, are nice (read gullible) enough to immediately accept helping the kingdom and people that they don't know, but don't change their decision when they hear MC predicts about being kicked out of castle and city just because of lack of skills, despite the other 40 people bringing enough merit to kingdom. I mean why bother helping your classmate, when you can help the people that kicked him out, right? As long as the author says you're good, you're good.
    • The kingdom is pitiful enough to kill one skill-less person out of 41 people, despite others having good skills. They don't care that it might have negative impact on MC's companions. And they just randomly think it's better to kill him when he is obediently leaving them, because why not? We should just hate the kingdom so let's make them cartoonishly evil.
    • The MC's struggles and desperations last an amazing... 10 seconds at most because he now possesses the biggest cheats incomparable to his other classmates, even the hero. He can just create skills on the spot. Thanks to that we don't even have time to connect with MC's feeling. They all feel cheap. He is already strong enough. Waaay more than strong enough! the only thing that awaits us is him getting some chicks every few chapters.
    • MC : This time-space magic is divine grade, better not show it to anyone. MC 30 second later : let's heal these guys with another divine grade magic and don't make up some lies about him not being the one healing them after they regain consciousness. also let's show them space-time magic. I mean, why almost every jap MC is so much of a ret*rd?
It's not really that hard to make a little more effort at the start of the story. I don't expect masterpieces, but at least make the MC's motivation, circumstances and actions a little more acceptable. It's the foundation of your story.

Clearly I'm dropping this.
 
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