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Edit: I realize my review seems pretty negative from the start, but I think it's worth readingI have two problems with this novel. One is that the translation isn't very good. For example, the female MC is often referred to with masculine terms or titles, such as "His Majesty". The dialogue is also confusing at times because the dialogue is credited to the wrong speaker, or the dialogue will speak about themselves in third person or be worded in a way that makes it unclear who is talking. I think some proofreading/editing is sorely needed.And the other one is more personal. Early on, I don't like how the male MC is near-constantly belittled, treated like a cute little pet and so on. Or maybe it's more how he seems to just let it happen, desite boasting about his "pride as a dragon slayer". Anyway, I wish the relationship was more equal. Or, well, in this novel it's probably more accurate to say I wish their positions switched more often, so it was more give and take.That said, after a bit, the relationship does become more like what I was hoping for, and from that point on I enjoyed reading it, despite the translation issues. So if you like the premise, which as another reviewer mentioned, somewhat resembles Love is War, it's worth a read imo