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up to ch33good premise, amateurish writing and bad translation.I like the premise, it is simple and straight in your face, nothing complicated at all, but the pacing of the story is quite rushed, as well as inconsistent characters. Example: Spoiler
the protagonist killing people without blinking by the truckload and then gets nervous when the battle happens
[collapse]All in all, subpar writing even by WN standard; for the LN version, I have no comment since this isnt that one.to top it off, the "translation" is nothing but straight up unedited MTL so read at your own risk.