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Ok, everything was almost perfect. The story isn't perfect but was still good in itself, 4.5 for me. The characters were also 4.5. The system scheme/build-up is okay as well. Actually I couldn't even find any major faults here EXCEPT, the way the author/translator keeps on describing the leads' kingly/queenly ethereal beauty. It was getting on my nerves that I mostly skip a few paragraphs whenever these phrases appear, and I am only in chapter 50. God help me if I could persist reading this story until the end with these annoying and stinging words. I mean, I almost dropped this novel in chapter 1. The moment I read 'if they could see her now, they would proclaim her as their queen'. I was like 'huh? what happened? did I miss something?' but then I was still in chapter 1.. But I still came back 2 days later since I began to understand that it was that kind of novel where the author is fond of overpraising his/her characters shamelessly anytime and anywhere in almost every scenario. Then comes, 'Ding! Awesomeness +10!' hahaha, I laughed sarcastically at the author's eccentricity. But it's not like it was toooooo bad, I was just a little surprised at first. The story is engaging and amazing and hey! it was my 'cup of tea' IF ONLY,.....! y'know
