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The fanfic is no big deal, the author did a lousy job of making the story engaging and when representing DC and Marvel, it often feels like I'm reading a generic Chinese novel. The MC robberies are not creative magicians like in Magic Kaito, it's easy to see at several points that a good part of the problems of most bad Chinese novels are present in this fanfic.It's easy to spot scenes that look like generic face-slap story provocations, young master or "Junior you dare" vibes, and some extreme but well-hidden prejudice against American officials.The worst of the fanfic are several extremely s*upid moments like a hero declaring in his civilian identity that he was injured fighting a villain, or the MC saying that if the government finds out that there is no nuclear bomb in the city they will throw a nuclear bomb in the city to solve a problem that could be solved by sending the army or iron man.
