Opening a Shop in the Nightmare World Chapter -- Discussion

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Overall, it was an interesting story. I finished reading this story. While the MTL'ed version is easy to understand, if you want to fully immerse yourself in the ghost stories, I recommend waiting for the translation.

Good points

- The shop and the ghost employees

- MC is calm, he's not trying to save everyone (he's actually pretty wary of everyone) but he still has empathy and will try to help other humans and ghosts if he can. It's satisfying to see him solve mysteries and face slap some people along the way

- The nightmare world. While done before, I think the way they explained it is interesting. You get more information about how it came to be by the end of the story. I liked the various nightmare missions and the ways to solve them. The horror parts had nice details as well.

Bad points

- Ending is extremely rushed. It really feels like the story is cut in the middle and they slapped a ending on it. The 10 years time skip feels like a joke..

- There's no romance. If you start reading this story expecting any kind of romantic relationship, you'll be very disappointed. The ML is more like a loyal protector and a friend to the MC. There's no mention of romantic feelings until a few vague lines in the last chapter and even then it could be interpreted just as friendship.

I would recommend this story if you like horror novels, ghosts and shop management. If you're here solely for the romance, it's not the story for you.
 
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