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ML really doesn't give MC any choice in the matter. Honestly, his behavior at the end is so different it almost feels like ooc. The ML had been portrayed as a good person, someone too good for their own sake, but suddenly he is a sadist??
We get several of his povs and they are so off to read. Him thinking and talking about punishment. Ugh. MC is the one with a body who gets involuntary turned on my other's misery and hatered, how did the s*x scenes become ML getting turned on by mc's tears?
Moreover, the ML is so self centered and jealous... MC literally ends the novel depressed, and all ML can think about is MC needing to earn his forgiveness for not confiding/relying on him with that, like what? And in response to mc's suicidalness he f*cks him so wildly that afterwards it looks like he has assaulted him?? He's so far from what MC needs that it's almost laughable. Almost. Not to mention MC is pretty much locked up with his life in ml's hands... MC is okay with it, but with how the ML is being, I can see this relationship turn completely abusive so easily... It's scary. And really not how I wanted his good novel to end.
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