The Return of the Iron-blood Sword Hound Chapter 457 Discussion

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This just wasn't enjoyable... too many excessive arcs such as 180+ school chapters, and 100+ prison chapters in a 500 chapter novel. The story seems poorly written and the characters seem effortlessly s*upid as they grow. Too many parts are forced and characters killed by seemingly s*upid reasons.

E.g the forest arc took like 90+ chapters and at the end of it they forced another 30 chapters just because author forced a scene where everyone let the antagonist talk, revive the patriarch and kill off several people of the tribe and then they fought a "tough" battle.

There are a few of scenes where they just stop mid fight to talk and let the antagonist push a plot directive.

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