The Support Magician Who Was Kicked Out of The Hero Party Will Begin His Adventure Chapter v28 Discussion

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The translation quality is good but unfortunately the author had an idea but knew not how to execute it.

I have nothing against slow paced, but this drags too much, the first volume (14 chapters) is just about him leaving the hero party, the author spends a lot of time just repeating himself and when the MC actually do something different it is actually off screen.

Very minor spoiler bellow:

I mean, when he actually leaves the party and when he goes adventuring, we see nothing. Just a mention that he actually has the strength of a B rank now, but arent even shown how he fights..

He buys 3 s*aves and doesnt even show the sleeping accommodations, at some point it is implied they were in his inn room.. But why would his room fit 4 people ?
 
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