- #1
I'm actually surprised it's ok (EDIT : Read the last paragraph, highly disappointed). After reading the many "cuck this" or "chad that" reviews, I expected something really low level, but it's not.Pro
- MC seems to hide a deeper complex character with a mask of a funny carefree person, so there is more to him than I expected. Overall he is interesting, very powerful, but not a total psychopath nor a hot headed angry simpleton.
- The story has more layers than I expected, especially with mc's past.
- All characters seem to be developed at least a little. The (ex) heroines who betrayed the MC seem to only be there a few chapters before disappearing from the story, but maybe they'll appear again later. Interestingly they look like the pawns of a game between powerful people, who used the person the MC took over, who was weak and not up to the task. Their betrayal was both expected and making sense given the manipulation of others, the former hero's inadequacies, and their own weak mind.
- The hinted heroines (not the ex ones), seem to be developed very slowly, which is good. And as far as of now, still no romance.
- The first chapter (prologue) was rough and honestly it looked like the rest of the story would just be basic not very good smut. Thankfully that doesn't seem to be the case but, while I understand the intro's idea since it's an "adult game", I think there would have been ways to write betrayal or even erotica better than this.
- While I can infer the (ex) heroine motivation for betraying the hero through the points I've underlined above, I think it would have helped to set things up with why they decided to betray the hero before he was taken over, because just the prologue was kinda abrupt. Especially as the author jumps through pov, so one chapter on why they decided to deceive the hero would have been made their logic... make more sense.
- MC seems to be obsessed by the size of his penis, hopefully the idea isn't to make him some kind of skirt chasing pe*vert when he can pitch a tent again, because that would kill the LN imo.Edit : MC turns to be a skirt chaser sadly as I feared, and the story into smut later, and cheating one too. Maybe the whole "harem seeking" thing appeals to some, and if so more power to them, but I'm not into that, minus 2 star.