Inside An Ad**t Game As A Former Hero Chapter 85.2 Discussion

Surprisingly good. No masterpiece of fiction mind you.

I like the MC. He's quite chill and nonchalant, he's not over or underconfident, and his speaking is just amazing. The dialogue from him is great, I think he really just conveys his feelings so well that the other person in the conversation will understand clearly what he is trying to say.

Characters are a dime a dozen. Frillite, Katarina and Mars were the few notables, with the MC having enjoyable dialogue and experiences together. I am interested in how his original party develops in the future, they're already getting some but the final push isn't there yet. The other heroes are dickheads unconditionally, and I can't remember anyone else.

Story is great as well, interactions with characters mentioned above, character levelling and killing monsters, travelling. It doesn't overstay any of those and character interaction is probably the strongest point of this Webnovel.

A few issues tho. 1st, MCs stronger than his level and it's never really explained.

2. Whenever the other 2 heroes show up, ab*se and insults will be throw own MCs way, and it gets annoying after abit.

3rd. Pink hair gag, gets annoying real quick.

4. Not enough damn chapters I wanna see more Katarina

Overall, 7.5 - 8 (enjoyable read)