Inside An Ad**t Game As A Former Hero Chapter 23 Discussion

  • Thread starter esther
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My biggest issue with this novel is some disjointed story telling and offscreen actions. Some things seem to happen because it's a funny idea but then they're not resolved properly. With that said, this story is hilarious. It has a really strong start with a petty chad bro being ridiculous. Would recommend for fun.
 
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