Inside An Ad**t Game As A Former Hero Chapter 106 part1 Discussion

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I've enjoyed the story up to this point but after chapter 100, everything fell apart for me.

Spoiler

The thing is, the original MC gets "betrayed" by his companions and he commits soul su*cide. I do say "betrayed", because the companions are also victims themselves as well in causing this betrayal. Regardless, betrayal is still betrayal and needs to be punished.

The author did a great job in outlining this and nicely developed proper punishments for the 3 characters, and the 3 of them also responded in such a way that showed they were trying their best to redeem themselves.

Up to this point is all nice and well.

The problems start to show up after the first 3 companions meet the new 3 companions. I would've expected the author to start building some sort of tension between them and have the MC solve that drama with his chad vibes, but that didn't happen.

The punishments that the author subjected the first 3 companions turned into mental torture. I did not sign up for that kind of thing. I'm all in for some all good deserved retribution for one's actions, but mental torture under the pretext of paying for this victimised betrayal crosses the line for me. (-1 star)

The second thing that ticked me off was the goddess.

It was fun in the beginning, when he gave MC manhood a boost and forced her angel to have s*x with MC. I though that was great for the laughs, but her behaviour in punishing a saintess candidate that was doing her best to save the people during a disaster against the very evil she was supposed to fight, only because she questioned her divine ass is just plain wrong.

From that point it made me realise that the goddess has a screw loose, in a bad way:

    1. Chose 2 people with evil dispositions as heroes
    1. Chose a weak willed individual to become a hero (MC before soul su*cide)
    1. Had her subordinate to be r*ped by a hero
    1. Punished a saintess candidate while trying to save people, for questioning her s*upid ass

This is just... I can't stomach this when the very goddess is supposed to be against evil, but it seems that she just f*cks up with everyone for her own pleasure. I have a strong feeling that she is also supporting the Demon King behind the scenes for the war to keep going forever. (-1 star)

I decided to read some spoilers to see if it will get better in the future, if it is worth to keep up the hope. But not for me.

Apparently, the MC eventually tells the companions that betrayed the previous MC what happened. The childhood friend of the previous MC decided to commit su*cide because of that. The relationship he had with Frielle, goes awry as well because of he began thinking with his c*ck. Forces a princess to rule a kingdom by kidnapping her.

Basically, there is no hope for the rest of the novel.

Welp, it was nice for the first 100 chapters.

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