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This is one of those stories that when you read the description give you the impression that it is a good story. But as soon as you have read more than 20 chapters you realize that this story is written by an author who doesn't know what common sense is or that people in general are able to learn things just from watching around them. The main character has such a lack of common sense that it affects the rest of the story. For instance if you have coins and you realize there are at least 3 different type of coins and you know the difference in value between the 3 than why give away the most expensive one as a tip and then not even half a chapter later complain about saving money? Things like these don't add realism, it makes the main character look s*upid dumb.