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One of my comfort reads! 4.5! Half off for bad villain.The FL and ML are both very likeable people. It does take a bit long to get to the romance, but I'm fine with it because when they do get there it's fluffy. ML is like a permissive parent to the lil ones but it makes sense... He's their older brother and he feels for them because they lost their parents and are so young while he is a grown man.The children are also cute. They have different personalities, one as childish as you'd expect for that age and one more precocious. That said the precocious one isn't like a creepy adult... She's kind of like Becky from Spy Family, someone who loves romance/drama.Story isn't exactly realistic and can be childish at times but is charming and easy to read. My one complaint is the villainess. I don't really like her because she is just one of those typical "oh she's so beautiful and she is infatuated with the ML" girlies. She's not super rude/annoying, but yeah... she's meh like a (Walmart) Soleia from Flirting with the Villain's Dad.Also keep in mind the original story had longer chapters. This team splits chapters so it gives an illusion that it's slower than it was meant to be.Now I have no complaints about people who don't like the same things as I do. But... I do think the 1 star ratings are a biiit harsh. I personally don't really believe in the 1 star for stories that are just mid or below average. That is what 2 star and 3 star reviews are for. 1 ought to be reserved for actual burning tr*sh.