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i love this novel, but somehow it felt like the author has too many things to write that all the plots jumbled up. Like for example yoonyoon, the character could be built more since he literally a dokkebi king but all he does is simping in japan with peace souvenir. There is no interaction abt yoonyoon or about the research with that doctor (forgot the name) which yoonyoon was assigned to help with. The conversation yuujin with hyunjae about the history of dungeon was cut short and was never continue. Like isn't that the reason why yuujin instructed yoonyoon to go dungeons to figure out the patterns and research with that doctor (name forgot) ? And most of the side characters like teawon, myeongwoo, sunghan etc are legit being left behind like they dont exist the moment the author has new ideas lol especially during the new world. What im trying to say is, the flow of the story is abit of a mess. It can be quiet boring in-between especially when yuujin tries to do everything all on his own, which he does alot that its getting frustrated. The unnecessary interference by yuujin when it doesn't even need to be sometimes made me quit reading or sometime I just skipped. i think its unfair for whoever translated this novel and has the audacity to CHARGE people who wants to read this. You stolen author's work and wish to get paid for "work" lol.