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You can get around the poor writing by skipping paragraphs [excessive repetition of simple concepts]. If the story had a proper editor you could chop it down by 2/3rds and have a much better product.The concept and plot is cute. The side characters are endeering. But the MC is a Gary Stu of the highest order. He has full isekai syndrome, and keeps calling everyone country bumpkins in his head because he came from the 21st century (and because hes *not at all* bitter at being treated like a peasant farmer... which he is). The way he gives up at the first opertunity to actually learn anything under his own power is a bit annoying. He would rather farm golden fingers than attempt to use the skills he has to solve problems. Why study? He just doesnt have the brain for it. Instead farm a photographic memory and level up intelligence to super human... so he can use it for... nothing much. Dude literaly has to be superhuman to do the basics any other protagonist would have covered. Dude metaphorically needs a machine gun to kill flys when he started with a fly swatter