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3/5. Difficult to rate. As many others Reviewers say, first 50 chapters are unique and pretty great. After Chapter 50 it really feels like a different 'genre' or tone shift. 1 - 50 is pretty heartwarming and cute, MC taking care of comatose wife, getting to hear her internal dialogue, and getting POV's of just about every Character and their reaction to MC and FL being together. GRANTED, he is doing this for 'System Points', so I kinda had to 'forget' that part purposefully, to make it seem more romantic. He does care for her a little though, so it's not like he's like "this is so annoying...." while taking care of her. No-one knows that she is conscious, and so he really does emotionally (and physically) save her, and becomes kind of like a 'light' to her.Once she wakes up though, this turns into the most generic 'isekai' wish fulfillment novel. It seems like it's even going in a harem direction... I'm all about wish fulfillment, but this one knocks you over the head with it so strongly, it's not subtle and it's pretty cringey to read honestly. The 'poem' arc is so cringey to me. I just don't get the whole "poems are amazing!" thing in many of these ancient China or wuxia novels. I think they maybe don't translate well to English. And they REALLY overdo it in this one. It last way too long, and is 5x cringier than any other poem literate MC I've seen. MC will say "I see 3 thousand rivers but only take a sip" and all the females swoon, and the scholars praise him, people just go CRAZY over these simple lines. So silly. that'll continue for like 30 chapters. Now around chapter 130-140 we are getting into a 'War' arc finally, where MC with his OP stats is gonna go be a 1 man army for the kingdom. This is the kind of wish fulfillment I'm cool with, HOWEVER, I am 90% sure as a result of this he will get to marry that princess that he went to war to save. Wife's internal dialogue, the princess' father's internal dialogue, heavily hint that they both want MC to 'take care of her', because she's in love with him. Why is she? Because she read his poems. Just goofy. We got 50 chapters building up for this MC and FL couple, then you wanna throw in another female into it like it's a generic harem, and not give her much story-time so it really feels like it's turning into a generic harem building wuxia isekai type novel. Still could change, she might not end up with MC I don't know, but it's heavily implying to a reader that she will. The War arc just started, and don't know how it's gonna end or what is next.
