- #1
What I want to highlight here, is not the plot or any character. For me, it's fine but the thing that burden me the most is the writing and translation. I'm not a chinese history enthusiast, so it's until much later that I realized this novel are based on real history. But the writing style is just so confusing. Especially with age. In one chapter it's an adult, but in much later chapter, it's implying that ir's a teenager? Like, what? The MC age is consistent, which is 23 years old. But other than MC, I just can't figure it out.Also, the writing likes to repeat things with different words. Again, and again, and again, to the point where I have to skim the page to see the next plot lead. It's really confusing as f. This is the sole reason of my low rating of 2.
