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Meh, too much plot holes, too much nonsense. It could have been awesome, instead it's just below average.Dropped.Pro
- The idea of a transported story without an overpowered hero is good. At least that way modern knowledge is used, instead of being forgotten after one chapter like I see in most stories.
- Pretty illustrations.
- Long chapters.
- Pretty ladies but not a ton of ecchi content ruining the plot. At least not in the beginning.
- Not a fan of slightly pe*vert MC, but he's not a huge one, so it's still bearable.
- Translation is OK. No Japanese words kept because they are "cool" like I see sometimes, making it a cringe fest to read. Only honorific titles are left, and that is acceptable.
- The MC is WAY too carefree: he's transported to another world, nearly dies because of his s*upidity, but no anxiety, everything is alright...
- Side characters are too open about him not being from there. They accept it just like that. No one is bothered that a totally literate stranger appears like this in a random village? Come on...
- Side characters lack personality and revolve too quickly around the MC. It's like they were waiting for him or something.
- Business and people reaction are weird. Spoiler
For example, Lyle helped the MC to make bombs without asking for anything in return, and after that always being with him in his business. Or the MC negotiation skills being non-existant. Or the Earl they see in Est being super polite with someone who is basically a nobody.
[collapse] - Huge plot holes, especially in how he creates his inventions. I mean, Spoiler
there are bombs, and he is able to create them just like that. No explanations. Last time I checked, even an engineer would find that super difficult without any prior base industry to lean on. And also, NO ONE thinks this is great for wars? And outside of that: gunpowder is invented, but no one cares until he does something with it???
[collapse] - The exchange rate between Japanese yen and this world currency is dumb. No exchange of goods, no exchange rate, economy 101.