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The story outline was good.... but author didn't put much into world development. When science and magic is introduced together it's important to explain mechanism on which world revolves. Spoiler[collapse]In world where magicians are hard to come by which idiotic king would allow a new invention like gun which can be used pretty much by anyone with little training? To boot it up, magiacians are scarse to come by.Oneof chapters general stated that guns and cannon could be washed away with water magic? Wtf! Can u imagine a span of battlefield getting washed with water with few magicians?Negotiationsas a merchant?nil!Which idiotic general would allow some barely unknown girl to barge in and alter military command line? In military, hierarchy is bloodline for efficient management.Andmore even during medieval period france, Italy, Poland, south east asian countries, Persians every1 had thier own sophisticated food cuisines.This story is nothing but jargon of author's wishes. Btw his writing style is even crappier. I cannot find a spec of character development, principles, world development/movements, individuality of sub-characters, narrative style, action & consequences like in Arifureta, shield hero, overlord, ISSTH, Altina, invincible saint. Dammit this was huge waste of time.