- #1
It is so slow. I understand a slow romance, but the plot itself is unnecessarily slow. Multiple chapters are taken up showing the same event from many perspectives that do nothing to further the plot or the characters. One character finds out a piece of information, they see it and it is described in detail to the reader. And then the same information is slowly put together by other characters who never show up again. What is the point of all this if not to waste time.I like the romance and I like the main characters. But the plot is what really makes this a hard read.