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MC is originally from the 21st century where she was mu*dered by OgFL and her past life seized this opportunity to pull her into the current multiverse to rewrite the fates of the cannon fodders and to give the ogFLs and ogMLs their deserved retribution. There are so many problems with the plot. For one, the multiverse seems to be written by 1 author who has a penchant for evil people being rewarded and good people being punished, and we later find out the author is ogFL. So potentially, we are looking at the ogFL not only creating the multiverse, but also the 21st century world that she came from because of the past life thing and also because it is revealed the 21st century world is also in a novel. But this theory doesn’t make sense because ogFL with the memories of the 21st century should be aware that the world they’re in is a multiverse, but she seems to think that she’s the only female lead. So the alternative theory is that this is a multiverse of different novels by different authors, which makes even less sense because why is the novel 21st century novel in a different universe? We know this because it’s repeatedly mentioned that FL transmigrated into the multiverse. And we also know that the current year is around 1980s, and assuming they transmigrated from 2010s/2020s, the grandparent generation would have some overlap but there’s no mention of this.
Another thing is “Heaven” is a compassionate existence that repeatedly assists FL and the other cannon fodders by subtly revealing secrets like FL is a prophet of sorts. It’s the first time I’ve seen a novel where Heaven is not described as emotionless and it’s obvious why this is never done. If Heaven was compassionate, there would be no evil. Technically, all the ogFLs would be considered “daughters of Heaven” because of their exceptional fortune. But after all is said and done Heaven is upset that the ogFLs have such poor morals and wants to “restore equilibrium” to the small world. This doesn’t make sense.
And I don’t understand how FL’s death in her original world was the key to unlocking ML’s freedom and allowing him to mu*der ogFL. It might have something to do with Heaven but this would make for a terrible plot for how arbitrarily Heaven interferes with the different worlds.
[collapse]I originally forced myself to continue reading because I was hoping things would start to make sense but this novel is really hard for me to enjoy. I would say if you’re the type to be unable to let go of plot holes when you spot them, then maybe you shouldn’t read this.