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Reay good tbh. I thought I was gonna quit reading after a few chapters in because the translation was sometimes literal and wordy, but the translator/s was getting better actually. There were some mistakes but it sort of was okay and understandable compared to other translations done. Thanks to the effort of the author and TL team. 🙏I'd just like to post this question if I understood it right. Were Louis and the other characters really bullying or violent toward Monica or was the slapstick comedy context lost in the translation?As for the story, I guess I would have wanted it to have a more 'josei' tone instead of a shoujo one. The plot had the makings of an intricately woven setup, but I felt limited since this story served as sort of the 'cutesy' and lighthearted type. If this had a more mature and depth to it, I feel it would have explored the conspiracies and character development much better. As it is, at the beginning, I thought that the characters were flat and very stereotypical. However, I did find the development more adorable than impactful. I appreciate the character growth, especially with Monica and how other started changing how they interact with her