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I really love this novel. But the chapters isn’t always the best, Spoiler
the war arc is not only focusing on Chungmyung’s POV and Jang Il-so always seems several steps ahead from Chungmyung. Honestly, I would love it if the author can focus more on Chungmyung. I don’t know how to explain it properly but it gets me dizzy that the author has to explain every tiny details about everyone, even the side character which will die anyway at the same chapter. I started reading the novel because of Mount Hua and Chungmyung but the author is focusing too much on others. There is too much characters on the novel. Even the reminiscing of the past of a not so important side character. The author will write 5-6 episodes which will not even mention Chungmyung or what they’re up to now.
[collapse]Sometimes I feel like skipping a chapter but I still like the writing and the ideas of the author. I appreciate them a lot. I know how difficult it is to write a novel like this.