General, Madam Called You To Farm Chapter 20 Discussion

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I heard a lot of good reviews about this and it could have been good if it was executed well.

This story is like someone one day suddenly thinks of "what if I'll write a story" without even thinking of what to write and was just going with the flow. This is that story. The author clearly just pull some things out of the rabbit hat. It's kinda messy. But it was slightly enjoyable.

It was slightly enjoyable because the writing style or maybe the translation just pull you out the story sometimes. I think there was three translation of this book circulating online and checking them out for better translation will disappoint you. The problem was not in the translation, though it's problematic also, but the way the author writes stuffs while leaving most of the detail. Like he or she was expecting us to read his or her minds and guess what he or she is talking about. It's so fast pace that the scenes weren't done decently, I'm still contemplating most of them. It's a big guessing game sometimes. Like a little detail could really spice this up. The author is either lazy, or just don't care that much for this book
 
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