I’m the Slit-Eyed Character at the Academy, but I’m not the Mastermind Chapter 83 Discussion

  • Thread starter MysticxMist
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  • #1
Can't Luna just be gone, maybe I would give a 5 star review if she was not there, c83 and it only gets worse. Why do writers insist on makin such bad caracters relevant in a storie, like, EVERYTHING ELSE is good, she alone can make the troupe a bummer. I swear if this WN was writen with the main caracter doing things behind everyones backs in the shadows.... and alone, it would have been a magnum opus.

Now for real, if the worldbuilding and premise is this good. Why not just get rid of romance, I'm pissed and I have not gotten to the harem part yet, it means is going to be worse.
 
  • #2
Interesting update!! Agree that there needs to be more details!! Why did the Wisp lead Rae where it did? Thinking that the area it led her to is a part of the Fae world that has died and those creatures were Fae! And why were they taking her?  I knew Atlas would come to the rescue.
 
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