- #1
The story is quite interesting, it wasn't bad enough for me to drop it. Can't say the same for the translation though, names/titles of characters, places and institutions are frequently changed.It doesn't help that the format of the text is just one long paragraph in the earlier chapters. It would've been better if there were separations when characters spoke to each other, at least even if some nouns suddenly changed its easier to infer which place or who they're referring to in the sentence.After reading this I have come to realize and appreciate good formatting in the previous novels I've read before. It is really essential especially if the translation quality is like this 😅. Reading one long block of text is quite challenging.Other than the translation I don't have much to say for the story itself. It's a short novel so you can expect that the pacing is quite fast and there some points that were just glossed over. The romance started slow and picked up very quickly. And there's the usual revenge plot and face slapping by MC to his pos relatives. Overall it's a 3.5 for me which I rounded off to 4 stars.