- #1
I’m having so much trouble getting through this. The makeup scenes are repetitive and get old so fast because of how little is actually explained and the way it is described is repetitive too. (If I have to read the word delicate one more time I’m gonna throw hands with the author). The relationship was very bland because it wasn’t really focused on, the characters were one dimensional we never learned too much about them or got into their heads. I really disliked their s*x even though it wasn’t really described because it was the same old “woman hates it and is hurt and the dude basically forces her and refuses to be gentle or improve his technique so she’s always incredibly sore after”.The kid is adorable but barely gets to do anything and I actually dislike how obedient and nice he is, because I’ve dealt with enough kids to know that even the nicest, quietest, disciplined children have their days and their moments. So he never felt like a real kid. He was just there to be cute and pitiful.
