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Your main character can be OP only so far before it gets ridiculous.MC is a genious actors, musitian, cook (in the beginning MC admitted that he was only ok, but then the author changed their mind and now he knows countless recipes). He is super cool and attractive. Everyone lusts after him: alphas, betas, omegas (not exaggerating, it is in text). His every action is perfect.The plot is as cliche as it gets. If you read one novel of a similar premise, than this novel will not surprise you.Side characters are divided into 2 groups: those who love and help MC, and cannon fodder.Speaking of which. The final drop after which I simply cannot take this novel seriously is when a military (!) robot (who is firmly in the "MC's brainless fan" category) treatend a civilian (!) canon fodder with a f*cking GUN for cannon fodder's antagonism with MC. The author was clearly going for "cool", but firmly landed on "WTF is wrong with this military?".World building is actually really weird. On one hand these robots are easily replaceable and destructable. On the other - they are self aware. Like, 100% artificial intelligence, every robot has it's own personality, and they get upset when disrespected.For once, ML is not a "cool boss" type but "externally cool, internally innocent" type. Still cliche, but not that overused.His deal is that he wants a relationship based on personality likes and not on pheromons. Interesting idea for a novel, I would've loved to explore it. But MC became interested in ML because of his appearence, not personality, so this doesn't count.
