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Legit tr*sh. Both the male and female lead are boring and one dimensional. Both seems to be lacking about -20 IQ points judging by the way they speak and act. The author does the classic thing where the female lead is absolute garbage from the get go with no redeeming qualities, that way even the tiniest good thing she does or say can be called ""character development"". The male lead Ricardo seem s*ave-like in his disposition to this girl, because he was saved by the villainess as a kid and this is apparently enough to put up with her annoying dogsh*t for over a decade.The conversations between these two characters make Oblivion NPCs seem lifelike, here is an example of dialog: – Do you know, Ricardo? I think I've met my destiny.– You mean that gentleman?– Shut up.– Hmm. Is he handsome?– Yes! He's very charming and kind!– But I'm handsome too, right?– Ugh... And let's not forget that the only reason the villainess starts liking the male lead is because of a sudden deus ex machina that shows her a what would have happened without the 'selfless' sacrifice of the male lead. Only a 'It's a wonderful life' ripoff and literally divine intervention could make this braindead bimbo see reason.Judging by the first 10 chapters I have serious doubts about the abilities of this Author, your average LLM could probably write better.
