The Villainess Whom I Had Served for 13 Years Has Fallen Chapter 72 Discussion

Starts off good and gets progressively worse for every other character but the 2 main ones. The main couple have great synergy and if the story was confined to them and 1 off stories of other characters then it would be great, but they decide to include the characters from the novel for no reason other than to show the strength of the protagonist. For me the best character in this novel is the villainess and the worse is either the MC or the freshman girl Hannah

Him reincarnating into the novel does not even matter for the story except provide a reason for

1) show off the he is a orphan once again, not really having a family or people he is close with 2) modern foo

3) creating a wheel chair and elixir from the novel (maybe

If you get rid of his reincarnation and kept his desire to protect his master nothing in the story really changes.

Spoiler

It's shown in a possible future where if he didn't save the villainess because he didn't reincarnate, he still would be there for her.

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This novel also does have a system; it is just not as annoying because it's not a major part of the story. It basically the only way the MC gets stronger. Most of the buffing missions happened in the past while the ones we see are just plot devices to advance character relationships, not the story. The novel story is on hiatus until the MC needs something or the author wants to sh*t on the novel MC.

So the outline for this novel goes main couple mini story -> novel character meets Mc-> system mission-> MC solves problem that either was part of the original novel, one that he created or one he interfered with and made worse thus needing to be solved -> repeat

This is very long but just understand it because the writing got worse around ch 45~ and I got very disappointed with it.