The Villainess Whom I Had Served for 13 Years Has Fallen Chapter around180 Discussion

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This review is a bit of a spoiler-esque apoiler, so read at your own discretion. I think the best time to read this review will be after you read a bit, around 20-40 chapters. It might help you in deciding rather or not, you want to continue. Also I read this quite a long time ago.

This is a story of a transmigrated butler, Ricardo, serving this villainess while doing a lot of other endeavors. That's the basic premise of it. The story mainly consist of 5 characters, Olivia, Ricardo, Yuria, Hannah, and Mikhail or something like that. The story developments will mostly be about our Ricardo's relationship and interaction with the other four.

Review time-

Imma say this before I get to the pros and cons, if you hate Olivia, I don't blame you. Honestly I would agree with you but I've read 180 chapters of this and she has grown on me. She's has a sht ton of growth but Hannah is just better. Even though she had a lot of growth, her starting point is soooooo low, therefore her rating on the best girl tier list ain't that high. Also for the people saying that she's acting like a child, she basically is. She was under the curse of her own delusions for like the ten years of her life and once she's out of that delusion, it'll be hard for her to act her age. So I agree that she is like a child at times, but do I mind that much? No.

Pros-

    • good interactions between Ricardo, Olivia, and Hannah. Their interaction carry the novel for me and if you don't like it then you probably won't like this novel.
    • The system. For me, this is both a pro and a con. It is a pro when it is used a way to progress the story and it is a con when it is used as a Deus Ex Machina.
    • Great character progression, this only applies for Olivia and Hannah.
    • Hannah, she's a pro for this novel just by appearing. She's the one who tries the hardest to try to do something for MC and catch up to him. She's also the one who shows her affection for MC the most. Don't why some people hate her. Prb just preferences.
Con-

    • A big big con, at least in my opinion. The interactions between characters gets better as the story goes on but the pacing also gets worse. So it really depends on what you care about in a story more.
    • The system basically forces MC to get involved with characters, such as Yuria. Like I'm fine with a lot of forced developments in novel, but this is one that I hate, especially when it's a character that I don't like that much.
    • A lot of very unnecessary drama/problems. To list some, Olivia's obsession with Mikhail, Yuria, and Mikhail. Though, up to the part where I read Yuria's situation is explained already but still I'd deem it unnecessary and s*upid. It'll probably be the same with Mikhail.
    • A lot of filler and this is coming from someone who fcking loves episodic chapters and moment. But sometimes it feels dragged out.
    • Speaking of filler, the pace of the novel also gets worse as the story goes on. If we have a graph for the pacing rating, it'll look like it's going down and then consistent. Then it does down again and stay consistent. Basically, pacing was goes over the places sometimes and I think that's partially because of the amount of fillers too.
    • The MC. I honestly don't know why he decide to keep serving Olivia, I know she saved his life but that don't mean she can do that to him. I mean she gets better but it doesn't mean we can just ignore what she did. So L on mc's part. And for people who are saying simp, y'all don't know what simp means. I feel like people just use the word simp whenever a male do something for a female. He wasn't even expecting anything back, all he wanted was for her to be happy, he didn't want Olivia to love him back or something sexual: which is the meaning of a simp. Men who are submissive to women, expecting something back: usual in a s*xual sense. Ofc there are other defs for the word, but people are using that word in this context for the novel when he doesn't even fit that description.
Overall, I don't know what to rate this novel, so imma just rate it a four. This novel isn't excellent, it isn't even close to that level nor do I think that it's a novel worthy of a 4.4. But I still enjoy reading this novel, character interactions is one of my favorite thing when reading. You have to gamble to see if you like it or not because I think the time to decide is when you get to around chapter 100. So make an time investment or just forget bout the novel and move on.
 
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