- #1
Oh my dear lord, it's my first time falling asleep while reading smut lmao.It was... Too long and too repetitive. He kisses her, then fingers, plays with her breasts and f*cks; kisses fingers breasts f*cks kisses fingers breasts-. All in one god damn go. I always found myself thinking "Didn't he just play with them? How they can get any swollen? How can you get any harder bro?"Smut scenes were way too long honestly, it wouldn't matter much if it was shortened to 1/3rd. Bore me to death.Dirty talk... I was busy laughing my ass off honestly I don't have that much to say about it. FL is also keeps saying that she's dying, played broken, dying again... No wonder the system keeps calling her s*upid, she's unable to think of 2 or 3 other thing to say.Plotline was flat s*upid, nothing to say about it.So yes. I guess that was it.