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This story is something that literally defies reality. I mean, the MC is so lucky and hansome, that is the only thing special about him.In my Opinion he don't fit to be the Main Character because it all feels too unnatural how he get so many women and it just so happen to be yuri as well.Also he feels too average and common to be impactful.I mean as a character, he got:•looks•Money•Power•Women•And all the things an average weeb could desire.But when it comes to fiction none of that really matters because those things are just imaginery. So, it will only give the reader a fake sense of happiness for a small moment.If you really want to have an impact on the reader what matters is the personality and story of the characters. The way you handle words is also important. In novels, the power and money are shown as just a number and no matter how beautiful we can't see or hear the beautiful girls the MC interacts with. And no matter how powerful the MC is, the reader will only think of it as an OP MC.Also, the Audience who would like this novel are only people who try to be drunken in fiction to escape their pathetic reality. (No offense, just think about it). I mean, I can understand if it was a villainous and despicable protagonist, but this one is a character who justifies his actions with excuses and it's even worse because it's in 3rd person perspective making it appear as if the one who is justifying his actions is the story itself.So, in my opinion it would have been better to make the main character into someone who DEMAND respect from the readers. Instead of someone who get fake respect out of nowhere (The only feelings that count in the story are the feelings of the reader) It would have been possible. Because yeager suffered a lot in his previous life. And his enthusiasm and determination could have been used to draw the people in.But the Author had other plans.Before he got dragged into the brothel he tried to fool an innocent rich girl and even made her abandon her family for him. To top it all off, he did so with ulterior motives. And even after regression he was a scumbag.At first it was a good story but it got bad as the story went on.All in all, it just feels like a tr*shy self-insert fanfiction of a great work of fiction..