- #1
Just overall I don't think this novel has much going for it. The author isn't very good at writing, every single plot point feels forced... Went to a store, happens to run into lover from last life, nothing happens -> Gets in game, somehow gets 1/10000 feather of calamity, -999 luck and summons loli -> loli lets him give up his lifespan in exchange for another roll -> despite having -999 luck he somehow gets the item he wants which then gives him 666 luck in exchange for him becoming female -> gets bloodline he wants and its justified because "he has 666 luck" despite the fact that apparently negative luck doesn't add a determent to his chances? Overall its just bluntly poor writing skills, the author is forcefully creating "random chance" which just makes the story unenjoyable, especially when the author could just change a few small details to make it not feel so forced (i.e. at -999 luck he asks the loli (who created the feather of calamity) to reverse the luck, so the loli makes him female in exchange since she is chaos. When rolling for bloodlines its a roll for just bloodlines and they are all op meaning its not "random chance" that he gets the op one. Its just poor quality writing where everything feels forced, which just destroys emersion.Now, if it was only the above then while I wouldn't like the story I would still give it 3+ stars since while there are issues its not that bad... What really makes this story sh*t is an issue most chinese novels where its just cultural differences on how to treat people. Its hard to explain, especially since I'm trying to avoid using certain terms, but just overall there are a lot of subtle things you can notice in the writing about the authors viewpoints on certain topics like women rights. If the story is good content thats enjoyable to read I can ignore it but with this forced plot movement and just the vibe the author gives out this story just isn't good. The only reason why I'm giving it 2 stars is because the translation quality is good.