Reborn as a Transcendent Chapter -- Discussion

  • Thread starter Swindler
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I'm sorry, but I have to tell you this,

There are a lot of unimportant parts in this story, but I will take the ones that I think are easy for you to remember.

starting from 2 useless characters S and T, whether these 2 characters are there or not, it still won't change the storyline.

it's better to just remove these 2 characters.

Actually, there are a lot of characters in this story that could have been developed, but unfortunately, they were left like that.

There are too many meaningless concepts of revenge in this story or you could say they are completely useless.

this story is too shallow.

I'm still reading it, but it won't change anything for me.
 
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