I’m an Ordinary Returning Student at the Academy Chapter 11 Discussion

It has a unique writing style that really prevented immersion for me. It's basically a bunch of conversations and inner thoughts with next to no description or narration of anything else.

The conversations and thoughts aren't particularly witty or interesting either.

Seems to have a fairly good grasp on a returning soldier's mindset but I just can't get past the writing style and lack of plot.

I'd say give it a try to see if it works for you though because I think stylistic things are very personal when they work or not.