Martial King’s Retired Life Chapter v850 Discussion

Initially I liked the novel, but after making no real development, the biggest thing in the novel is backstory and world building.

a few things urk and piss the living sh*t out of me some things I understand but many of it is there for the giggles that aren’t there anymore.

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characters are okay, but one that does kinda piss me off is su xiao instead of trying to act like a guy, he does a bunch of girl sh*t and keeps saying he’s a guy, plus whenever MC gets close to a girl he’s always jealous like what the f*ck is going on

MC isn’t dense but a coward, his shiyi offer her v*rginity to someone else and he flips out but doesn’t say he like her, like she is one the author is trying to set up with MC but MC is constantly going after other girls

in chapter 8 he gets angry at himself for not being able to save boss shen because she’s been kidnapped but half the time he was trying to maintain his secret identity but there’s no point to it. He could have easily gone to her location beat up everyone and carried her to safety but instead he spends 30+ chapters making sure no one knows he is master ming

im overall disappointed with the direction this story took and I’ll be ending it if there is no real plot that the MC is involved in, the romance is literally snails pace the main girl (shi Yi) only shows up for an entire 30 chapters out of the 8 volumes

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