Martial King’s Retired Life Chapter 813 Discussion

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start good. many scheme. some bittersweet banter. showing off power.

but later too many narration.

slow romance and romantic subplot is an exasegaration, for me it is non-existent... even that novel that I hate atart it at 4xx but this after 600++ it barely showing romance and that is only on the Boss Shen case as for other, Bah! it remind me of that novel where real romance start at 1300++

in the later chapter the MC still our lovely MC there is nothing wrong, he keep growing in all aspect but it is sad other character seems like become a blank slate, there is no correlation with how they described at the start, it doesn't mean they are growing, NO! it more apt the other way.
 
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