- #1
I love the concept, but the author isn’t able to do it well. It’s a pretty flat story which becomes less entertaining with every chapter.It’s kind of funny sometimes. But whatever’s going on is always, always not as funny or awesome as it could be, or even as you expect it to be. The romance is also annoying: beautiful women falling for the MC for no reason at all, the MC falling for beautiful women for no reason at all (i.e. Simply because they’re beautiful). Sometimes, the author makes the wuxia and martial arts parts of the novel (and other things) interesting and sensible. Other times, he pulls them out of his ass and gives no regard to continuity or believability.During the first few chapters, I hoped it was just getting into its groove. Forty chapters later, I've stopped trying to fool myself about it, and can only accept that it's just an okay story.